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PostSubject: The Outsiders Sequel   Fri 07 Jun 2013, 1:07 am

I wrote a story. It's a short story. It's a sequel to the book called "The Outsiders" by S.E Hinton. This is based in the late 50's early 60's so I know some of the language is slang. (ie. Shoot)

*** means it's a new day. Or a topic change.

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PostSubject: Re: The Outsiders Sequel   Fri 07 Jun 2013, 1:10 am

Sounds really good.I like it.
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PostSubject: Re: The Outsiders Sequel   Fri 07 Jun 2013, 1:44 am

Thank you. Does anybody have any critiques, things they like, or just want to share they're favorite part? I am open to all.
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PostSubject: Re: The Outsiders Sequel   Fri 07 Jun 2013, 1:59 am

I don't have a favorite,but how about adding more Drama something to intrigue the reader.



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