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Gareki
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| Subject: a old sketch drawing  Mon 10 Jun 2013, 8:01 am | |
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this is old and i can't believe i was proud of this wow u can critique i guess (but actually help me with it) | |
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linda88
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| | Subject: Re: a old sketch drawing Sun 16 Jun 2013, 3:36 pm | |
| i think this is really good! i would give it a 9/10 | |
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Ariana
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| | Subject: Re: a old sketch drawing Sun 16 Jun 2013, 6:31 pm | |
| The link is invalid. Meaning I can't see the picture. | |
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A
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| | Subject: Re: a old sketch drawing Sun 16 Jun 2013, 11:24 pm | |
| Cute! What a cutie pie! Hm, maybe try making the head a bit smaller? And adding some shoulders? But she's so cute!
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Aden
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| | Subject: Re: a old sketch drawing Mon 17 Jun 2013, 1:08 am | |
| Hm, the face proportions are a bit off, I suppose. Also, the top of her head is flat, a bit too small. But it's great. Keep it up!
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Ariana
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| | Subject: Re: a old sketch drawing Mon 17 Jun 2013, 1:21 am | |
| I just have to add in, that I love the handwriting and the large eyes. 7/10. Good work. | |
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Gareki
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| | Subject: Re: a old sketch drawing Mon 17 Jun 2013, 1:38 am | |
| thanks since this was a pretty old fricking drawing thanks guys | |
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Witch
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| | Subject: Re: a old sketch drawing Mon 17 Jun 2013, 1:41 am | |
| Ah its really cute, even for an old drawing! You have improved quite a lot from this drawing, but its still very nice! | |
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Aden
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| | Subject: Re: a old sketch drawing Mon 17 Jun 2013, 1:43 am | |
| @Gareki: But it doesn't change the actual quality of the drawing. It may be old, and you have improved, but that doesn't change the actuality of this drawing. Sorry.... if I may have sounded rude. ]: | |
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Gareki
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| | Subject: Re: a old sketch drawing Mon 17 Jun 2013, 1:54 am | |
| @witch thank you [:
@aden well idk, since its old and if you made an old drawing and improved greatly i think critiques on old drawings is ok. i honestly don't mind if people critique my old drawings what i care most is people critiquing my new drawings today to help me improve more. | |
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Ariana
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| | Subject: Re: a old sketch drawing Mon 17 Jun 2013, 8:46 pm | |
| Well then, post a new drawing for us to see. | |
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