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PostSubject: a old sketch drawing   Mon 10 Jun 2013, 8:01 am

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this is old and i can't believe i was proud of this wow
u can critique i guess (but actually help me with it)
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PostSubject: Re: a old sketch drawing   Sun 16 Jun 2013, 3:36 pm

i think this is really good! i would give it a 9/10
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PostSubject: Re: a old sketch drawing   Sun 16 Jun 2013, 6:31 pm

The link is invalid. Meaning I can't see the picture.
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PostSubject: Re: a old sketch drawing   Sun 16 Jun 2013, 11:24 pm

Cute! What a cutie pie! Hm, maybe try making the head a bit smaller? And adding some shoulders? But she's so cute!

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PostSubject: Re: a old sketch drawing   Mon 17 Jun 2013, 1:08 am

Hm, the face proportions are a bit off, I suppose.  Also, the top of her head is flat, a bit too small.  But it's great.  Keep it up!

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PostSubject: Re: a old sketch drawing   Mon 17 Jun 2013, 1:21 am

I just have to add in, that I love the handwriting and the large eyes. 7/10. Good work.
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PostSubject: Re: a old sketch drawing   Mon 17 Jun 2013, 1:38 am

thanks since this was a pretty old fricking drawing thanks guys
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PostSubject: Re: a old sketch drawing   Mon 17 Jun 2013, 1:41 am

Ah its really cute, even for an old drawing! You have improved quite a lot from this drawing, but its still very nice!
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PostSubject: Re: a old sketch drawing   Mon 17 Jun 2013, 1:43 am

@Gareki: But it doesn't change the actual quality of the drawing.  It may be old, and you have improved, but that doesn't change the actuality of this drawing.  Sorry.... if I may have sounded rude.  ]:
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PostSubject: Re: a old sketch drawing   Mon 17 Jun 2013, 1:54 am

@witch thank you [:

@aden well idk, since its old and if you made an old drawing and improved greatly i think critiques on old drawings is ok. i honestly don't mind if people critique my old drawings what i care most is people critiquing my new drawings today to help me improve more.
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PostSubject: Re: a old sketch drawing   Mon 17 Jun 2013, 8:46 pm

Well then, post a new drawing for us to see.
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